Tuesday, October 7, 2014

Go world video analysis

I determined the idea by thinking back when I wasn't able to be good at anything. When I was younger, I didn't really have the guts to put in the hardwork that I had to put in to become good at anything. I was scared to come out of my "shell" and prove what I can do. 
 
  I determined the right words by putting down what people would say to me. 

   I wrote three drafts and the first one was not that good but it was getting to my point. I was really thinking hard on this video because my grade was low. 

  I didn't get feedback on my video, I just let everybody see my video and they were saying that it was really good one. They boosted me up to keep trying to make it better and better. It was helpful because I received a really good grade on it.

 I had to gather my pictures together, then made sure they were in order.

  I was astonished by my work, because I put in a lot of hours into that and it was just awesome to me how well I did on it. Now I know I can do well on my work, I need to start doing that in every class and on every assignment.

  It felt great to show off my work in class, because everyone was clapping and telling me I did a good job. http://animoto.com/play/7Fir0pVkJeqUKGiuSQVsvg
 
    

1 comment:

  1. You say here that you wrote three drafts, but you didn't get any feedback. This is sad. The best writers always want feedback, so they know how to improve. How can you be purposeful in trying to improve your writing, if you are not prepared to share it? Also, I wish you would have written more here about how you chose the words and phrases that you did. Real writers think about meaning. I would have like to see your thinking. 3-

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